Hey, Darcey! I really like how well you described this creature, such as using the words misbehaved, grumpy, e.t.c. Did you know that a few weeks ago, our class created the 100WC prompt? I know two words from it were crimson and grave, but I can’t remember the rest. I have never seen a monster, and I hope I never do! Next time, make sure to capitalize your title when you upload. Also, check out my blog if you want!
From,
Max in Illinois, U.S.A
A very descriptive story,Darcey.
Not a single mistake.You have a very imaginative mind.I could not have
made it better!
Hey, Darcey! I really like how well you described this creature, such as using the words misbehaved, grumpy, e.t.c. Did you know that a few weeks ago, our class created the 100WC prompt? I know two words from it were crimson and grave, but I can’t remember the rest. I have never seen a monster, and I hope I never do! Next time, make sure to capitalize your title when you upload. Also, check out my blog if you want!
From,
Max in Illinois, U.S.A
(My Blog) https://kidblog.org/portfolio/8gowqm7kcp4g9ip1le1shvx1o/posts?author=8gowqm7kcp4g9ip1le1shvx1o&status=published&status=review&status=draft