A great story Thomas!I like how you added the word homework.
I really like your story Thomas.
A great story.I liked how you used frantically.Amazing work
A good story.I like the part when he sees the legs frantically running around the forest.
Grate story!I liked when the boy said can I go to the park?
Love the story . I really like the first bit .
awesome story.I liked that you said”I wanted to help it,but I didnt wan`t to get squashed by the huge legs”.what happens`s next?
WOW i love it GOOD WORK.
I really liked it because i liked how you put after your home work from emily.
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A great story Thomas!I like how you added the word homework.
I really like your story Thomas.
A great story.I liked how you used frantically.Amazing work
A good story.I like the part when he sees the legs frantically running around the forest.
Grate story!I liked when the boy said can I go to the park?
Love the story . I really like the first bit .
awesome story.I liked that you said”I wanted to help it,but I didnt wan`t to get squashed by the huge legs”.what happens`s next?
WOW i love it GOOD WORK.
I really liked it because i liked how you put after your home work from emily.