The limited edition bike

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7 Responses to The limited edition bike

  1. ahmaa1 says:

    good story well done

  2. pilld says:

    Great story! I like how one of the police man dropped his doughnuts in shock!!

  3. burre says:

    Fantastic. I liked the story when her jets went flying over the police.

  4. webbc says:

    Great story.It was a bit confusing and you forgot some capital letter’s but I liked the jets.

  5. fkita says:

    Cool.I like how the police man dropped his doughnuts.

  6. dixow says:

    It was briliant .

  7. bishr says:

    I like your story George but make sure it makes sence.

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