a superb story well done
Love the story . I really like the bit of the underground shoemaker . Quit crazy right
super story
Great story. I think you could add a bit more to your story but WELL DONE!
I love it because I love that she has a under ground worcshop
I really like your story Julia. You could work on your spelling a bit and punctuation. I like your title.
I like how she has a secret passage way to deliver her good shoes. Well done
Amazing story i liked when you wrote uderground workshop
I think the story is beautiful. I love the name Rita it is wonderful. Well done Brodj. From Blaie
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a superb story well done
Love the story . I really like the bit of the underground shoemaker . Quit crazy right
super story
Great story. I think you could add a bit more to your story but WELL DONE!
I love it because I love that she has a under ground worcshop
I really like your story Julia. You could work on your spelling a bit and punctuation. I like your title.
I like how she has a secret passage way to deliver her good shoes. Well done
Amazing story i liked when you wrote uderground workshop
I think the story is beautiful. I love the name Rita it is wonderful. Well done Brodj. From Blaie